Posted by: Katie B | July 22, 2010

An inspirational escape – on Route 22.

For all you Jersey-ans, it’s true.  There is a hidden little oasis of nature and inspiration right in your backyard.  Right off of Route 22.  Yes, that Route 22.  And it’s called – brace yourselves – Echo Lake Park in Mountainside, NJ.   

I’m serious.  We all drive through it, speeding as a short cut from Mountain Ave to Springfield Ave to get to the garden center, or the vet, or the pediatrician.  But have you stopped recently?  Have you explored the wetlands preserve?  Have you gone on a pedal boat?   

It is actually pretty neat.   

Granted, when we were there, a large corporate b-b-q was taking place complete with loudspeakers and cat calls.  There was also the usual parade of muffler-challenged muscle cars.  But in between the shrieks of weekend entertainment, there were tranquil moments of peace in an unlikely location.    

Deer fence has been installed along every inch of the refurbished wetlands project.  The result:  a beautiful display of fauna, flourishing inside its protective barrier.  We saw green hummingbirds, blue butterflies, and red dragonflies.  We were teased by jumping fish and croaking bull frogs.  The tall rushes and elegant cattails whispered in the summer wind.  It was 90+ degrees outside, but along the lake it felt like spring.  Hmmm – I may be waxing poetic but can you tell – I was pleasantly surprised.   

Echo Lake

 

For $10, you can rent a pedal boat (which fits four) and observe the wildlife from “the inside”.  It was so nice to relax and have time to spy for treasures, instead of pointing to them out the bug-smeared window at 25mph.  And it was so reasonable!  Where else can you find an hour’s worth of entertainment at $2.50 per person?   

So what does this have to do with writing?  Well…they had these picnic tables, set under 80′ oak trees, along the banks of the cattail encrusted lake.  Grab your laptop and go.  Take a break, go on a boat trip, return to your spot.  Take a cooler of treats or visit the snack bar, and then return to your spot.  I’ll be there myself once school starts.  Be sure to wave as you drive by.

Posted by: Katie B | July 21, 2010

Westfield Critique Group Picks up Steam!

It takes awhile for something that’s never been before to be born.  Especially when that something is as impalpable as a discussion group.  The people have to find you (Hello, here I am!  Come join me!).  The people have to have the same objectives that you do.  The people have to find the time and make a committment (gasp!).  Or, more appropriately, the people who find you have to be committed.  Committed to writing.  Not an easy task. 

But after a year, yes – a year, the Westfield Critique Group seems to be taking form.  I was told one of the strongest writing groups in Women Who Write took a year to come together.  For one whole year, the gal who started it sat alone in the library, reserving a spot, waiting for the group to come.  And eventually they did. 

I essentially did the same thing.  I decided on a schedule, time, and location, and waited (at home) for the emails of interest to arrive.  It took awhile but it seems to be worth the wait.  We’ve had quite a few writers come and go.  But the writers who shuffle in now by 9:30am after a 45 minute commute on a Saturday are prepared to work.  I am so grateful.

We are still open to new members, so if you find this post, contact me asap.  I’m not sure how much longer we will have space…well – that may not be true but it sure sounds good after so long.  We meet every other Saturday at 9:30am at the Westfield Memorial Library.  If you see as at one of the round tables, be sure to stop in and say hello.  And if you’re brave enough, stay awhile and join us.

Posted by: Katie B | May 23, 2010

One Success is Not a Guarantee

I have two stories to share with you regarding published writers.  I don’t mean to scare you off, but I was struck by how uncertain success is in the publishing business, even for those lucky enough to finally “make it”.  

Story #1:  Author gets introduction through published friend to friend’s editor.  Editor loves picture book and publishes it.  Amazing!!!  Author gets accolades and sells thousands of books in just three months.  Libraries are big purchasers.  Fantastic!!!  Then – nothing.  After initial sales frenzy, book sells only a few thousand in the following five years.  Editor does nothing to promote the book and it is slated to go out of print due to lack of sales.  Author has written consistently and finally sells her second book, seven years after the first, through another agent (who she also met through an introduction).  I give her a lot of credit for not giving up.  That must have been a long and frustrating seven years.

Story #2:  Author signs with agent over first novel, targeting a certain ethnic group.   Agent sells the book to one of the top publishers.  They launch it in hardcover, it receives loads of praise, and they set up a whopping two publicity events.  Author hires her own publicist and does her own self promotion.  She visits every ethnic organization in the tri-state area with book signings and speeches.  Promotion of her book becomes a second job.  Flash forward, publisher is debating release of her book in paperback due to low sales volume.  Author’s ability to sell her second novel is being impacted by sales level of the first.  Again, that has to be so frustrating.

Basically, the underlying message is that one success, or even two, is not a guarantee for long-term success, additional publications, a career, or a living.  Although if you keep working, sometimes for seven years, you may get another chance.

I promise my next post will be more uplifting…

Posted by: Katie B | May 10, 2010

A Little Good News Goes A Long Way

Well, it finally happened!  I’m going to be published!  That’s right, I’m bonafide. 

The Lighthouse at Night

An excerpt of my Young Adult Novel, Birthrite, is going to be published in the 2010 edition of Goldfinch, the literary magazine of the New Jersey based women’s writing group, Women Who Write, Inc.  It won’t bring me any money.  It won’t bring me a national tour including a morning slot on the Today Show.  But what a thrill none-the-less!  I will see my words in print (albeit only the first chapter), and I can keep a copy for my children’s scrapbook.

But most of all, how amazing was it to receive something other than a rejection in the mail!  This is why we do it!  This is why we keep submitting, even to small, limited, private publications!  This is what keeps us going!

Imagine opening the mail to read the following:  “I am pleased to announce that your story excerpt Birthrite has been selected to appear in Goldfinch 2010.  Congratulations!”

Sure beats my last piece of recycling: “Sorry, not for me.”  Yes, it was that brief.

Thanks Goldfinch for making my day!

Posted by: Katie B | April 11, 2010

Seminars, Classes, and Critiques – Check these out!

I went to a great seminar recently sponsored by Women Who Write, Inc. in New Jersey.  It was an afternoon panel discussion for authors, Q&A style, that covered finding an agent / editor / publisher, preparing your ms for submission, and marketing your published work.  The audience had seven published authors from all mediums available to answer any and all questions.  What an incredible body of information. 

I’ll try to share everything I learned, but it may take a couple of posts.  On this post, I’d like to share some of the classes and opportunities I learned about.  I’ve spoken about the SCBWI and the New School, but here are some others worthy of checking out:

Rutgers University Counsel on Children’s Literature (RUCCL) One on One Plus Conference.  This year it will be held on October 16, 2010.  Applications will be due sometime in July.  Check out the website for details which should be coming this month.  A great opportunity to have a one on one mentoring session with a professional PLUS you get to submit to all participating professionals.  This is the KEY.  Skip that slush pile, y’all.  Hop to the top!

The Gotham Writer’s Workshop in NYC ( http://www.writingclasses.com).  Holds classes both in NYC and ONLINE.  This is also key – you don’t need to be here to take advantage of what they have to offer.  I’ve heard great feedback on their classes.  Often times writers will take the same class season after season – and they find all the other writers in the class do as well.  Before you know it, you have another great network of writers to support you.  Another defacto critique group, if you will…

Peter Murphy (http://murphywriting.com) holds a series of writing seminars and retreats here in the New Jersey area and “across the pond”.  I am told by several writers who attended one of his retreats, he changed their lives.  

Media Bistro (www.mediabistro.com) is an online resource for media professionals.  They offer writing courses for all types of mediums across the country and online.  If you can’t find the seminar you are looking for in your home state, simply sign up online.  What’s great about their offerings is that it includes items other than “just” writing.  For example, writing a proposal, starting a website, blogging, editing, getting over writer’s block, etc.  As you know, writing the book is not the only step to getting published.  These other offerings can fill in.

The Palms

OK – you’ve written a book.  You poured your heart and soul into it.  Your friend likes it, your mother loves it, and your spouse has abstained from saying anything.  You’ve read tons of books and yours is by far better than half of what is on the market.  You’re ready to get published, or so you think.  So, how do you start?  Where do you submit first?  Agent or editor?  Large house or small boutique?  They are going to be fighting over your manuscript, and so you have to choose who you submit to wisely.  Right?  Umm, well, maybe if the muses tap dance on your laptop.  But for the rest of us, the best thing to do is STOP. 

For first time writers, I’ve heard it dozens of times, I’ve read it dozens of times, and I’ll tell it to you here:  DO NOT, repeat DO NOT submit your work just because mom likes it.  If you have not gone through the following steps, you will find yourself wasting a lot of time and money submitting your work only to get rejected…and potentially losing the opportunity to re-submit once your manuscript is polished to perfection.

Believe it or not, your work may not be as publishable as you think.  (Sorry)  Not to say that it isn’t good.  But the business of publishing and the art of writing are two very different (and often adversarial) things.  If you want your piece to get published, you have to make sure it is ‘publish worthy’ and not just well written.  Believe me that taking the time to get this part right is not a waste.  And since every publishing house and writing agency is searching for different material, you have to find it the right home.  This means more time and homework.

Feel free to ignore my advice.  You might be that lucky one in a million.  But for the rest of us, I suggest the following:

Join the SCBWI (or some other writer’s association) and start researching the industry.  A good association will have seminars on getting published and will help break down the mountains of information about agents, editors, etc.  They may also have networking events where you can meet professionals face to face and hear what they are interested in.

Visit your local library.  There are loads of how to books on getting published, writing a novel, etc.  There are also detailed resource guides; in particular the Writer’s Market, which is known as the writer’s bible.  

Meet other writers.  They can be an incredible support network and information source about the marketplace.   Different from the library, I find the real-time exchange of experiences from other writers easier to disseminate.  It is also the most current.

Go to a First Page Session (bring a tissue – it may hurt).   You will have the opportunity for professionals to critique the first page of your piece.  If they don’t get past the first page, they will never read the full book.  Think about it…This will probably be very eye-opening.  I’ve seen many a first writer realize a painful ‘ah-ha’ moment during these sessions.  And the feedback the professionals give on others’ works can be just as poignant as your own.

Take everything you learn, rework your piece, and go to a Mentoring Session.  Same critique idea but for a larger portion of the manuscript.  And it is face to face.  With a professional.  Yup.  You should be ready.  Bring more tissues.

Join a critique group with other writers.  Can’t stress this one enough.  And it’s free!  If you only do one thing on my list, please do this.  Why?  Because you are not allowed to submit your book, not even once just to see how it does, until your critique group tells you it is ready.  It is the only way to know for sure that you will not be wasting time, money, and future opportunity.

Last thing is: keep writing, keep submitting, keep working and don’t give up.  Getting published is not as easy as you think (you have probably realized this by now).  Behind every published work is years of toil, and the ability to develop a think skin.  You have the best chance of success if you don’t give up!

Posted by: Katie B | March 5, 2010

Thick Skin? No. Rejection Letters Just Hurt.

I hear it again and again, and I have pushed it more than once myself:  to be a writer, you must have perseverance.  Determination.  No matter what you hear, you have to keep writing, keep working, keep submitting.  You have to find the home for your work, it won’t find you.  

My Ego

 

But when someone you have pinned all your hopes on delivers your worse fears to you in 12 point, its hard not to waver.  Wallow a little.  That little voice which sits inside me, repressed most of the time, found an outlet today in a rejection from a valued professional in the industry.  Try this one out for size: 

“I enjoyed your interesting premise and the world you created in your novel (good!).  That being said, I ultimately (irrelevant use of adverb – writing 101) think this manuscript is not a good fit for our list.  (here it goes) The market is saturated with fantasy books and I don’t think this can stand out in today’s tough marketplace.  (ouch)  I wish you the best of luck in finding a home for this book (but you just said it would never sell…).” 

Here’s the last one: 

“I have some concerns with the manuscript as presently written.  I think that the conflict in the story may be too easily resolved.  I feel that the story could benefit from a stronger narrative hook, which would help it stand out from similar projects in today’s market.  Ultimately, (there’s that word again) I feel it would be unfair for you to enter into a relationship with an agent who possesses these reservations, so unfortunately I am unable to be of help in placing your work at this time.” 

Does it matter that I wouldn’t mind entering into the relationship even if he has those reservations?  No, I didn’t think so. 

Time will heal this wound, just like it has healed all the others.  But for a little while (or a long while), I was thirteen again and my delicate self-esteem had been bruised.  It is just one person’s opinion but until you find the right one, it seems like the only one.

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